[pkg-files] igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes.

[mat]

Maj

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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/pkg-files/chapter.xml

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"the" is needed here.

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"files" is needed here. It's not necessarily clear from context whether it is talking about files or variables.

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To display a message when the package is installed,

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This could be more imperative:

Do not add an entry for <filename>pkg-message</filename> in <filename>pkg-plist</filename>.

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<command>pkg install</command>, use

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automatically be added to the package. It will be run twice by

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<command>pkg</command>, the first time as <literal>&dollar;{SH}

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s/installed/installed,/

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s/need be/needed/

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"files" is needed here.

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among several ports or when it is necessary to write to one of these files

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the directory containing the <filename>pkg-<replaceable>*</replaceable></filename> files).

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"the" is needed here.

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s/pair/pair,/

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s/get/be/

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Passive to active:

s/will replace/replaces/

[mat]

Closed by commit rD45579 (authored by @mat).