This is my work on the Pantheon desktop for 2023Q3 status reports.
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- R9:c4a6f51b4a53: Status/2023Q3/pantheon.adoc: Add report
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Thanks @duchateau.olivier_gmail.com for your report. I have suggested a few improvements.
@grahamperrin: You might want to have a look at the unordered lists. I have forgotten how we are used to format them this quarter too. This time I will write it somewhere, so that I can look it up next quarter.
| website/content/en/status/report-2023-07-2023-09/pantheon.adoc | ||
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| 5–6 | Please remove the text in the last pair of square parenthesis. | |
| 12 | ||
| 16 | This is unclear to me. I try to suggest a rewording: please tell me if this was what you meant. | |
| 25–29 | ||
| 31 | ||
| 34 | Where have they been added? Added to what? | |
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Hi
List item (bullet point) style and punctuation
I'll take a closer look after content lands in GitHub. Thanks.
| website/content/en/status/report-2023-07-2023-09/pantheon.adoc | ||
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| 16 | Ping: @duchateau.olivier_gmail.com could you please answer to this? Thanks. | |
| 34 | Ping: @duchateau.olivier_gmail.com could you please answer to this? Thanks. | |
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I am unable to contact the original author. I commandeer the revision. I will attempt to fix the few issues I have found.