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Community: mention the official FreeBSD channel on YouTube
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R9:09c1f2d19993: Community: mention the official FreeBSD channel on YouTube

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Community: mention the official FreeBSD channel on YouTube

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R9 FreeBSD doc repository

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lwhsu requested review of this revision.Jan 10 2021, 4:29 AM

lwhsu created this revision.

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B36076: Diff 82007.Jan 10 2021, 4:29 AM

ygy added a subscriber: ygy.Jan 10 2021, 4:41 AM

ygy added inline comments.

en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/community.xsl
138–142	I think it should be "there is an official channel with ..., and a channel ...". (ref: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/there-is-there-are/, though I am not a native speaker) Additionally, "events recordings" => "event recordings" "full length 1 hour": I personally think it is unnecessary info and could be removed.

Grammar fix and description tweaking.

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B36077: Diff 82008.Jan 10 2021, 4:46 AM

ygy added inline comments.Jan 10 2021, 5:04 AM

en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/community.xsl
140	I feel like a comma could help here: ", and a BSD Conferences channel..." Also, "developer summit" should be plural ;)

Grammar.

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B36078: Diff 82009.Jan 10 2021, 5:08 AM

Thanks!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Jan 10 2021, 5:31 AM

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