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Community: mention the official FreeBSD channel on YouTube

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lwhsu requested review of this revision.Sun, Jan 10, 4:29 AM
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ygy added inline comments.
en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/community.xsl
138–142

I think it should be "there is an official channel with ..., and a channel ...". (ref: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/there-is-there-are/, though I am not a native speaker)

Additionally,

"events recordings" => "event recordings"
"full length 1 hour": I personally think it is unnecessary info and could be removed.

Grammar fix and description tweaking.

en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/community.xsl
139

I feel like a comma could help here: ", and a BSD Conferences channel..."

Also, "developer summit" should be plural ;)

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Sun, Jan 10, 5:31 AM