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Adding the section on multi-user WINE installations,

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The writing is great. I've added a few comments on some things to fix.
I look forward to the final piece.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/wine/chapter.xml
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Single sentence paragraph. Maybe you can add something or merge it with the previous or next <para>.

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s/an prefix/a prefix/

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Can you link to it directly? The primer has a description on how to do that:
https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup-links.html

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same here.

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&lt; --> <
&gt; -- > >

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&lt; --> <
&gt; -- > >

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The screen tags can be indented under the <para> and only when you break lines within the <screen>, those must not be indented.

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This needs the # to be replaced with &prompt.root; here.
The indentation also needs to be on the same level as the <para> above. But just on this line, the others below are fine.

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Maybe you can use callouts (section 9.5.7 of the FDP primer) here to reference the changes in the file?

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Indent this on the same level as </para>.