WINE Section: Multi-User WINE
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Adding the section on multi-user WINE installations,

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acpkendo_gmail.com created this revision.

The writing is great. I've added a few comments on some things to fix.
I look forward to the final piece.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/wine/chapter.xml
30	Single sentence paragraph. Maybe you can add something or merge it with the previous or next <para>.
40	s/an prefix/a prefix/
62	Can you link to it directly? The primer has a description on how to do that: https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup-links.html
64	same here.
70	< --> < > -- > >
97	< --> < > -- > >
107	The screen tags can be indented under the <para> and only when you break lines within the <screen>, those must not be indented.
120	This needs the # to be replaced with &prompt.root; here. The indentation also needs to be on the same level as the <para> above. But just on this line, the others below are fine.
148	Maybe you can use callouts (section 9.5.7 of the FDP primer) here to reference the changes in the file?
166	Indent this on the same level as </para>.