Adding the section describing two advanced GUI applications for managing WINE.
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I like your writeup of this chapter. A few comments inline for style fixes, nothing major.
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20 ↗ | (On Diff #79588) | See example 9.37 on how to pull up the "<link" part to save a bit of space in that line where the URL is. It's not wrong, just a tip. |
32 ↗ | (On Diff #79588) | There are < and >'s here, which can be replaced by < and >, respectively. Is that your editor doing that? You can do a sweep over the whole document once you're done and do a search & replace for these. |
38 ↗ | (On Diff #79588) | No indentation within <screen> tags, see section 9.5.9 of the FDP primer. |
44 ↗ | (On Diff #79588) | Unindent this section here as well. |
187 ↗ | (On Diff #79588) | s/avaialble/available/ |
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44 ↗ | (On Diff #79588) | The start of this <screen> section is aligned with the start of the <para> section above it (although I have indented the second line to it), is this correct now? It does look like the example in the Primer. |
Final clean-up, fixed some indentation, broken brackets around the <application> tags.
A bit more indentation is needed in this file, the text itself is fine.
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/wine/chapter.xml | ||
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105 | This line needs to be indented just like in the other <para> above. | |
109 | Same here. You can also install textproc/igor to get warnings about it. | |
115 | This should be on the same level as the tag above (the <para>) and only when it overflows the line, the one below the line with the <screen> on it does *not* need to be indented. Same for <programlisting>s. | |
148 | More indentation isses here. | |
166 | Indent me. :) | |
168 | Here the indentation is OK again. |