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Authored by acpkendo_gmail.com on Nov 16 2020, 4:43 AM.

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Adding the section describing two advanced GUI applications for managing WINE.

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acpkendo_gmail.com created this revision.

I like your writeup of this chapter. A few comments inline for style fixes, nothing major.

chapter.xml
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See example 9.37 on how to pull up the "<link" part to save a bit of space in that line where the URL is. It's not wrong, just a tip.

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There are &lt; and &gt;'s here, which can be replaced by < and >, respectively. Is that your editor doing that? You can do a sweep over the whole document once you're done and do a search & replace for these.

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No indentation within <screen> tags, see section 9.5.9 of the FDP primer.

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Unindent this section here as well.

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s/avaialble/available/

See updated diff for detail.

chapter.xml
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The start of this <screen> section is aligned with the start of the <para> section above it (although I have indented the second line to it), is this correct now? It does look like the example in the Primer.

Final clean-up, fixed some indentation, broken brackets around the <application> tags.

A bit more indentation is needed in this file, the text itself is fine.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/wine/chapter.xml
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This line needs to be indented just like in the other <para> above.

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Same here. You can also install textproc/igor to get warnings about it.

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This should be on the same level as the tag above (the <para>) and only when it overflows the line, the one below the line with the <screen> on it does *not* need to be indented. Same for <programlisting>s.

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More indentation isses here.

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Indent me. :)

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Here the indentation is OK again.