WINE Section: Launching Your First WINE Program

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Summary

This diff will add the third section in the chapter, "Launching Your First WINE Program."

[bcr]

Can you provide the image file as well?
It's a good starting text. A sweep through it for the use of "you" would be good.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/wine/chapter.xml

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You can use &os; as a placeholder for "FreeBSD". Also, I think the 's is not needed here.
To avoid the use of "You", how about writing: Running the First WINE Program on &os;

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Updated per previous feedback.

[bcr]

Minor nit. We can also run over the document with a search & replace later and look for "FreeBSD" and replace it with "&os;".

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/wine/chapter.xml

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It still says "FreeBSD" instead of &os;

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Final revisions (fixing lots of jacked-up DocBook indentation, plus a couple of instances of "you," and other style-related updates).

[bcr]

Looks good now, I can fix some of the indentation when the whole chapter gets committed.
This file is complete as it is now. Thank you!

[netchild]

Do you agree that this is committed and the differential can be closed?

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Hello, apologies, I'm just seeing this.

Yes, I concur that this was committed. Please let me know if there's anything I need to do on my end.

[netchild]

This is committed.