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WINE Section: Launching Your First WINE Program
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This diff will add the third section in the chapter, "Launching Your First WINE Program."

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acpkendo_gmail.com created this revision.

Can you provide the image file as well?
It's a good starting text. A sweep through it for the use of "you" would be good.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/wine/chapter.xml
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You can use &os; as a placeholder for "FreeBSD". Also, I think the 's is not needed here.
To avoid the use of "You", how about writing: Running the First WINE Program on &os;

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Updated per previous feedback.

Minor nit. We can also run over the document with a search & replace later and look for "FreeBSD" and replace it with "&os;".

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/wine/chapter.xml
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It still says "FreeBSD" instead of &os;

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Final revisions (fixing lots of jacked-up DocBook indentation, plus a couple of instances of "you," and other style-related updates).

Looks good now, I can fix some of the indentation when the whole chapter gets committed.
This file is complete as it is now. Thank you!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Dec 4 2020, 5:33 PM