Reorganize the installation section to follow the bsdinstall steps
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A few comments, but I'm generally glad this gets added to the handbook.
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml | ||
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| 1092 ↗ | (On Diff #69641) | I think the "Or" can be removed here. |
| 1094 ↗ | (On Diff #69641) | s/this/these/ |
| 1097 ↗ | (On Diff #69641) | This sentence needs to be after the "...<filename>-mini-memstick.img</filename>." sentence. |
| 1100 ↗ | (On Diff #69641) | s/first configured/configured first/ |
| 1100 ↗ | (On Diff #69641) | s/menu shown/menu is shown/ |
| 2135 ↗ | (On Diff #69641) | s/skipped pressing/skipped by pressing/ |
| 2152 ↗ | (On Diff #69641) | s/skipped pressing/skipped by pressing/ |
| 2871 ↗ | (On Diff #69641) | Can you shorten this to have the link just say "RFC4862" instead of the full link to the IETF document? |
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Fixed. Please can you take a look at the first paragraph? I don't if it's enough clear...
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OK, we're getting there. Just one sentence that needs the be extended a bit and we're good.
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml | ||
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| 9 ↗ | (On Diff #69646) | This is an if-sentence, but there is no "then" part at the end. I guess you wanted to say here that if disc1.iso or memstick.img is selected, then the installation files are fetched directly from the media without having to go to the internet. |
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Yes, that's better. We'll use this version for now and can improve it later if necessary.