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[handbook] bsdinstall update allocation disk section
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Authored by carlavilla on Mar 12 2020, 8:15 PM.

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rD53975: Update the allocation disk section

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Update the allocation disk section

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Compile the handbook

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carlavilla created this revision.Mar 12 2020, 8:15 PM

Looking good in general, just replaced a few will-future with simple present.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
1317 ↗	(On Diff #69437)	s/will show/displays/
1331 ↗	(On Diff #69437)	s/will show/shows/
1335 ↗	(On Diff #69437)	s/in/is available in/
1370 ↗	(On Diff #69437)	I'd just say "drives" instead of "hard drive(s)", which also includes SSDs and NVMe.
1375 ↗	(On Diff #69437)	s/will exit/exits/ s/hard drive/drive/

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Thank you, commit approved!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Mar 12 2020, 9:19 PM

Closed by commit rD53975: Update the allocation disk section (authored by carlavilla). · Explain WhyMar 12 2020, 9:24 PM

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