Brian Haug haug.bsd6114 AT yahoo
- Group Reviewers
- rD51813: Cover using symbolic names for interfaces in VLAN article.
A few corrections and sentence rephrasing.
This line needs to be connected to the sentence above (after the sentence stop) and reflowed properly.
Don't use "I" in the handbook. Make it third-person, like this:
For example, interfaces for video and audio can be named to associate ...
This needs to be wrapped in <replaceable>s as the address is not static.
This sentence could be a bit shorter to simply say: For an interface named <literal>video</literal> use the following:
I'd write the sentence as follows: To apply the changes at boot time, add ...