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Cover using symbolic names for interfaces in VLAN article of handbook.
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Authored by sevan on May 26 2018, 6:49 PM.

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Bug 228231
Brian Haug haug.bsd6114 AT yahoo

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A few corrections and sentence rephrasing.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
5274

This line needs to be connected to the sentence above (after the sentence stop) and reflowed properly.

5276

Same here.

5281

Don't use "I" in the handbook. Make it third-person, like this:

For example, interfaces for video and audio can be named to associate ...

5292

This needs to be wrapped in <replaceable>s as the address is not static.

5298

s/interfaces/interface/

This sentence could be a bit shorter to simply say: For an interface named <literal>video</literal> use the following:

5303

s/confguration/configuration/

I'd write the sentence as follows: To apply the changes at boot time, add ...

This revision was not accepted when it landed; it landed in state Needs Review.Jun 10 2018, 6:31 PM
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