Bug 228231
Brian Haug haug.bsd6114 AT yahoo
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- rD51813: Cover using symbolic names for interfaces in VLAN article.
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A few corrections and sentence rephrasing.
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml | ||
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| 5274 ↗ | (On Diff #43043) | This line needs to be connected to the sentence above (after the sentence stop) and reflowed properly. |
| 5276 ↗ | (On Diff #43043) | Same here. |
| 5281 ↗ | (On Diff #43043) | Don't use "I" in the handbook. Make it third-person, like this: For example, interfaces for video and audio can be named to associate ... |
| 5292 ↗ | (On Diff #43043) | This needs to be wrapped in <replaceable>s as the address is not static. |
| 5298 ↗ | (On Diff #43043) | s/interfaces/interface/ This sentence could be a bit shorter to simply say: For an interface named <literal>video</literal> use the following: |
| 5303 ↗ | (On Diff #43043) | s/confguration/configuration/ I'd write the sentence as follows: To apply the changes at boot time, add ... |