Brian Haug haug.bsd6114 AT yahoo
- Group Reviewers
- rD51813: Cover using symbolic names for interfaces in VLAN article.
A few corrections and sentence rephrasing.
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This line needs to be connected to the sentence above (after the sentence stop) and reflowed properly.
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Don't use "I" in the handbook. Make it third-person, like this:
For example, interfaces for video and audio can be named to associate ...
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This needs to be wrapped in <replaceable>s as the address is not static.
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This sentence could be a bit shorter to simply say: For an interface named <literal>video</literal> use the following:
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I'd write the sentence as follows: To apply the changes at boot time, add ...