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Cover using symbolic names for interfaces in VLAN article of handbook.

Authored by sevan on May 26 2018, 6:49 PM.



Bug 228231
Brian Haug haug.bsd6114 AT yahoo

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A few corrections and sentence rephrasing.

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This line needs to be connected to the sentence above (after the sentence stop) and reflowed properly.

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Same here.

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Don't use "I" in the handbook. Make it third-person, like this:

For example, interfaces for video and audio can be named to associate ...

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This needs to be wrapped in <replaceable>s as the address is not static.

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This sentence could be a bit shorter to simply say: For an interface named <literal>video</literal> use the following:

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I'd write the sentence as follows: To apply the changes at boot time, add ...

This revision was not accepted when it landed; it landed in state Needs Review.Jun 10 2018, 6:31 PM
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