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Authored by sevan on Aug 12 2017, 5:41 PM.
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Dan Bright freebsd@zaziork.com

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A few comments.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml
1883 ↗(On Diff #31991)

I left the empty prompt there as an indicator that there is no output from the previous command. I'm not too picky about leaving it there, though. Users can try it out for themselves without inflicting too much damage. ;-)

1892 ↗(On Diff #31991)

Whether something is easy or not is different for each user. I would keep it formal: "To get the current status of a share, enter:"

1899 ↗(On Diff #31991)

I think the $-sign after sharesmb does not need to be there.

1904 ↗(On Diff #31991)

I think it would sound better to write "sharing of a dataset". And I would keep the "simple" out of it and write: "To enable sharing of a dataset, enter:"

1914 ↗(On Diff #31991)

The name of the pool/dataset is missing in this example.

Address the points raised.
Reword the paragraph covering setting additional flags for a NFS shared dataset.

sevan added inline comments.
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml
1883 ↗(On Diff #31991)

I put it back, seems sensible to avoid alienating the user.

I missed something in my earlier pass. When you've fixed that (which should be quick), you can commit it.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml
1891 ↗(On Diff #32212)

There seems to be a line break here, which should not happen in a word that has been enclosed in tags. I think the original author did this: <acronym>ZFS </acronym> (note the space) and then broke the line. The </acronym> must be on the previous line and then broken into the next line as a whole: "... and how" (line break with the usual indentation)
<acronym>ZFS</acronym> datasets ...

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