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- rD50627: Rewrite the symlink bits and introduce RLN.
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A few textual corrections, nothing major.
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml | ||
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| 86 ↗ | (On Diff #31515) | I would stop the sentence after the {PREFIX}, to have less commas in a sentence (I love using commas myself, but the sentences get too long and difficult). Having smaller sentences helps to understand the two cases here. |
| 87 ↗ | (On Diff #31515) | You would use "on the other hand" only if you previously wrote "on the one hand". I would replace it with "In the other case". |
| 125 ↗ | (On Diff #31515) | here, I would just use "however" instead of "on the other hand". |
A small nit, then it's perfect.
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml | ||
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| 87 ↗ | (On Diff #31517) | It's "In the other case", not "On the other case". |
| 88 ↗ | (On Diff #31517) | Here, I would not stop the sentence, just remove the commas and the sentence stop after the </filename>. The full sentence should read: In the other case, if one or both of the paths are outside of <filename>${PREFIX}</filename> use <command>${LN} -s</command> and only prepend <filename>${STAGEDIR}</filename> to the target's path. |