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Applied the changes suggested by @bcr.
Also, expanded the explanation with a brief tutorial on how to communicate with the device through the cu command.
A few more suggestions.
book.withusb.xml | ||
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6359 | You should mark this up with replaceable tags around the X, so that it is clear that this is the part the user has to change: | |
6360 | the number of the device. | |
6362 | It's simpler to write: | |
6367 | I would also markup speed in <replaceable> tags here. Examples should be something a user could enter at the prompt and it would work, even though the speed is not the correct one. Having replaceable tags, you can reference it in the sentence following the example to change the speed to the one fitting the device. |
One small nit.
book.withusb.new.xml | ||
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6363 ↗ | (On Diff #38322) | Needs a space between "Use" and <command>. |
book.withusb.new.xml | ||
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6363 ↗ | (On Diff #38322) | fixed |