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wblock - Commits
- rD48703: Document USES=sqlite.
rD48701: Document USES=mate.
rD48704: Catch up with the different USES.
rD48702: Document USES=pyqt.
rD48697: USES=tcl/tk gained tea support, while there, rewrite the whole thing, it
rD48700: Document USES=gnome.
rD48699: Document USES=firebird.
rD48698: Document USES=7z.
rD48696: Improve USES=shebangfix's documentation.
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| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/uses/chapter.xml | ||
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| 1837 | variables variables is repeated repeated. | |
| 1844 | "Contains" is not needed, just "The list of supported interpreters." | |
| 1851 | "Contains" is not needed. Maybe: The list of obsolete, old-style invocations of interpreters. | |
| 1852 | The second part of this needs to be a separate sentence and is hard to understand. What will be appended to what else, and why? What is this used for? "The SHEBANG value is compared to the obsolete/outmoded/deprecated interpreter invocations listed in interp_OLD_CMD. Then something happens (the user is warned, portlint freaks out, the time/space continuum is damaged)." | |
| 1863 | "Contains" no es necesario. | |
| 1864 | s/It has a default value of/The default value is/ | |
| 1870 | Not clear what "support" means here. Is it in addition to something, or is it switching from something? | |
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/uses/chapter.xml | ||
|---|---|---|
| 1851 | The list of bad shebang lines, like /bin/bash or /usr/bin/perl Maybe wrong is better. | |
- The original example was bad, try to make it better.
- Update shebangfix with wblock's comments.
- USES=tcl/tk gained tea support, while there, rewrite the whole thing, it
- Document USES=firebird.
- Document USES=gnome.
- Document USES=mate.
- Document USES=pyqt.
- Document USES=sqlite.
- Catch up with the different USES.
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/uses/chapter.xml | ||
|---|---|---|
| 464 | s/Adds/Add/ | |
| 1460 | Possibly s/If the needed,/If needed,/ | |
| 1742 | Use serial comma: | |
| 1853 | Is "correct" needed here? The "path to the command interpreter" is assumed to be correct. Unless this means something more specific, like "the correct path to the command interpreter on &os;". | |
| 1862 | It might help to have a sentence that explains how they are wrong, like <para>The list of wrong invocations of interpreters. These are typically obsolete paths, or paths used on other operating systems that are incorrect on &os;. | |
| 1865 | "it" is not clear here. interp_OLD_CMD ? | |