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Authored by bhd on Nov 7 2015, 5:44 PM.
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rD47758: Update to r40905:
Summary
  • fixes missing &os;, &linux; and incorrect <xref> tags
  • general rewording to replace "you" and address redundancy
  • removes deprecated apps: abacus, gimp-devel, guppi, konq-plugins and renames koffice to calligra
  • incorporates redundant summary into synopsis
  • fixes incorrect port/pkg names and adds localization notes where applicable
  • moves some <sect2> to <sect3> as they make more sense as subsections
  • rm openjdk compile as icedtea Makefile now does this for user
  • bumps up some pkg/port versions
  • adds some URLs to less known apps

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Ein paar Sachen habe ich gefunden...

desktop/chapter.xml
26

hier würde ich entweder "Serversystemen" schreiben oder Server-Systemen.

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graphische

626

auch hier: graphischen

764

hier braucht es kein Komma, das "oder" genügt.

769

Tablets

1049

hier fehlt ein Punkt.

1086

ein Leerzeichen zuviel vor "Ausrichtung"

Fehler habe ich korrigiert. Vielen Dank für den Review.

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