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Make descriptions in Jail chapter more concise, add references

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Make descriptions in Jail chapter more concise, add references

These changes are based on suggestions by vale:

  • add conciseness
  • avoid the use of won't and use "will not" instead (and others like it)
  • Do not start sentences with a reference

Originally, this was part of a patch to add updated FreeBSD versions to
the jails chapter. I've split those out and committed them in
e4fc6b8657422d02cb1eddb166b928cf851be5ac separately.

Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D49038

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jpb_jimby.nameAuthored on Apr 18 2025, 10:52 AM
bcrCommitted on Apr 18 2025, 10:58 AM
Differential Revision
D49038: Changed all 13.x to 14.2 re bugid 275685
Parents
R9:e4fc6b865742: Update jails chapter for FreeBSD version 14.2 in examples
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