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Index: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
@@ -999,9 +999,9 @@
&prompt.root; <userinput>service autounmountd start</userinput></screen>
<para>The &man.autofs.5; map format is the same as in other
- operating systems, it might be desirable to consult
- information from other operating systems, such as the <link
- xlink:href="http://images.apple.com/business/docs/Autofs.pdf">Mac
+ operating systems. Information about this format from other
+ sources can be useful, like the <link
+ xlink:href="http://web.archive.org/web/20160813071113/http://images.apple.com/business/docs/Autofs.pdf">Mac
OS X document</link>.</para>
<para>Consult the &man.automount.8;, &man.automountd.8;,
@@ -3369,7 +3369,7 @@
disable-empty-zone "0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.IP6.ARPA";
disable-empty-zone "1.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.IP6.ARPA";
-// If you've got a DNS server around at your upstream provider, enter
+// If you have a DNS server around at your upstream provider, enter
// its IP address here, and enable the line below. This will make you
// benefit from its cache, thus reduce overall DNS traffic in the Internet.
/*
@@ -3425,7 +3425,7 @@
// query-source address * port NNNNN;
};
-// If you enable a local name server, don't forget to enter 127.0.0.1
+// If you enable a local name server, do not forget to enter 127.0.0.1
// first in your /etc/resolv.conf so this server will be queried.
// Also, make sure to enable it in /etc/rc.conf.
@@ -3621,7 +3621,7 @@
// understand how DNS and BIND work. There are sometimes
// non-obvious pitfalls. Setting up a slave zone is usually simpler.
//
-// NB: Don't blindly enable the examples below. :-) Use actual names
+// NB: Do not blindly enable the examples below. :-) Use actual names
// and addresses instead.
/* An example dynamic zone
@@ -4763,7 +4763,7 @@
<programlisting>LoadModule php5_module libexec/apache24/libphp5.so</programlisting>
<!--
-I don't think this is still needed
+I do not think this is still needed
AddModule mod_php5.c
&lt;IfModule mod_php5.c&gt;
DirectoryIndex index.php index.html
@@ -5015,7 +5015,7 @@
a forum for the trade of unlicensed commercial software or
worse. If anonymous <acronym>FTP</acronym> uploads are
required, then verify the permissions so that these files
- can not be read by other anonymous users until they have
+ cannot be read by other anonymous users until they have
been reviewed by an administrator.</para>
</note>
</sect2>

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