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Fix broken link to PDF using archived copy on archive.org
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Authored by sevan on Oct 5 2016, 5:53 PM.
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rD49465: Fix dead link to Apple's whitepaper on their AutoFS implementation using…
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We link to a PDF in the handbook by Apple on their AutoFS implementation in OS X. This has gone missing recently it seems (Bug 213022)

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sevan updated this revision to Diff 21079.Oct 5 2016, 5:53 PM
sevan retitled this revision from to Fix broken link to PDF using archived copy on archive.org.
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wblock added a subscriber: wblock.Oct 5 2016, 6:18 PM

This is fine. Would you like to fix the sentence that leads up to it while we are here?

sevan updated this revision to Diff 21083.Oct 5 2016, 7:06 PM

Updated diff with amended sentence and some points raised by igor

wblock added inline comments.Oct 5 2016, 8:30 PM
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
1002 ↗(On Diff #21083)

Needs two spaces at the start of a sentence: https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style-guidelines.html

2813 ↗(On Diff #21083)

This is a whitespace-only change that should be done separately from content changes.

3372 ↗(On Diff #21083)

Usually embedded sections of code are direct copies from the original, but this is okay. Might as well remove the unnecessary "got".

5253 ↗(On Diff #21083)

This is a whitespace-only change that should not be mixed with content changes.

5341 ↗(On Diff #21083)

This is also a whitespace-only change.

sevan updated this revision to Diff 21094.Oct 6 2016, 1:23 AM

Address the issues raised with previous diff

bcr accepted this revision.Oct 6 2016, 1:38 PM
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This looks good now. Thanks for your help, Warren!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Oct 6 2016, 1:38 PM
wblock accepted this revision.Oct 7 2016, 3:51 PM
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No problem, looks good to me too.

Sevan, please check with igor -Rz, build-test, mold into an evocative artwork, and so forth before commit.

Closed by commit rD49465: Fix dead link to Apple's whitepaper on their AutoFS implementation using… (authored by sevan). · Explain WhyOct 7 2016, 6:00 PM
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network-servers/
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