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Index: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml
@@ -1095,8 +1095,8 @@
<row>
<entry>500101</entry>
<entry>February 19, 2003</entry>
- <entry><sys/dkstat.h> is empty and should
- not be included.</entry>
+ <entry><sys/dkstat.h> is empty. Do not include
+ it.</entry>
</row>
<row>
@@ -2500,7 +2500,7 @@
Legacy RFC 1724 behavior of the IP_MULTICAST_IF
ioctl has now been removed; 0.0.0.0/8 may no longer
be used to specify an interface index.
- struct ipmreqn should be used instead.</entry>
+ Use struct ipmreqn instead.</entry>
</row>
<row>
@@ -2621,7 +2621,7 @@
<entry>May 5, 2008</entry>
<entry>7.0-STABLE after some &man.lockmgr.9; changes,
which makes it necessary to include
- <filename>sys/lock.h</filename> in order to use
+ <filename>sys/lock.h</filename> to use
&man.lockmgr.9;.</entry>
</row>
@@ -3490,7 +3490,7 @@
<function>sx_init_flags()</function> KPI. The
<constant>SX_ADAPTIVESPIN</constant> is retired and a
new <constant>SX_NOADAPTIVE</constant> flag is
- introduced in order to handle the reversed
+ introduced to handle the reversed
logic.</entry>
</row>
@@ -4722,7 +4722,7 @@
<row>
<entry>1000034</entry>
<entry>June 3, 2013</entry>
- <entry>10-CURRENT after the addition of the following
+ <entry>10-CURRENT after the addition of these
functions to libm: <function>cacos</function>,
<function>cacosf</function>,
<function>cacosh</function>,
@@ -5342,9 +5342,9 @@
pattern used to be year followed by the month, but we decided to
change it to a more straightforward major/minor system starting
from 2.2. This is because the parallel development on several
- branches made it infeasible to classify the releases simply by
- their real release dates. If you are making a port now, you do
- not have to worry about old -CURRENTs; they are listed here just
- for your reference.</para>
+ branches made it infeasible to classify the releases merely by
+ their real release dates. Do
+ not worry about old -CURRENTs; they are listed here just
+ for reference.</para>
</note>
</chapter>
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