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Authored by mat on Aug 20 2014, 3:07 PM.
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mat retitled this revision from to [security] igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes..
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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml
429 ↗(On Diff #1221)

Needs comma after "directory".

430 ↗(On Diff #1221)

"in your environment" is kind of vague. "Environment variable" as previously used is redundant but somewhat less vague.

434 ↗(On Diff #1221)

Needs comma:

<filename>${PORTSDIR}/security/vuxml</filename>, set

435 ↗(On Diff #1221)

Again, "environment variable" is clearer.

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This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Sep 15 2014, 9:40 PM
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Closed by commit rD45615 (authored by @mat).