FreeBSD Software Bill of Materials

[tuukka.pasanen_ilmi.fi]

Summary

SBOM activity report for 2026Q1

[gperciva_tarsnap.com]

website/content/en/status/report-2026-01-2026-03/sbom.adoc

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A few grammatical mistakes, and also suggestions to make the text a bit shorter and more direct.

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[tuukka.pasanen_ilmi.fi]

All seems to be making text better. Should mark them done or upload new patch with changes?

[salvadore]

In addition to the inline comments, we also need to have one sentence per line.

In D56299#1288766, @tuukka.pasanen_ilmi.fi wrote:

All seems to be making text better. Should mark them done or upload new patch with changes?

If you could upload a new patch with the changes it would be great

website/content/en/status/report-2026-01-2026-03/sbom.adoc

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Additionally, "and it have been under active work" --> "and have been under active work"

[tuukka.pasanen_ilmi.fi]

Updated wording from reviewed version.

[tuukka.pasanen_ilmi.fi]

Hopefully I got it correct this time.

[gperciva_tarsnap.com]

website/content/en/status/report-2026-01-2026-03/sbom.adoc

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One sentence per line, please. (This also applies elsewhere in this file.)

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I think that for multiple sentences within a bulleted list, you need to use + at the end of the previous sentence. (I did this in the suggested edit.)

It's worth double-checking this yourself with the fixed file.

[tuukka.pasanen_ilmi.fi]

Used grammar tool to verify language and added some commas where they where suggested. Bit worked a language and removed some repeating and added some also. Also split every sentence to own line.

[tuukka.pasanen_ilmi.fi]

Sorry about this hustle. Didn't remember that every sentence in own line rule. Now it should be better and solid.

[gperciva_tarsnap.com]

Looks much better, thanks!