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Avoid the use of "you" in the network-servers chapter
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Summary

Rewrite sentences that contain 'you', which should be avoided according
to the FDP Primer. The resulting sentences are easier to understand and
often shorter. I did not change programlistings and other output as
these are from programs, which need to be changed first (out of scope of
this change).

Event: Oslo Hackathon 2025

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bcr requested review of this revision.Aug 28 2025, 3:29 PM
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This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Aug 28 2025, 4:06 PM