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Update de_DE/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml to r47566
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Authored by bhd on Dec 28 2015, 9:54 PM.
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rD47925: Update to r47566:
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Rewrite the X configuration section to better suit current conditions.

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Sieht gut aus, habe trotzdem ein paar Verbesserungsvorschläge.

x11/chapter.xml
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s/intsalliert/installiert/

563 ↗(On Diff #11749)

... um eine Liste ...

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ermittelt wurde (Singular)

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das Setzen oder einfach nur "... können durch setzen ..."

bhd marked 4 inline comments as done.Dec 29 2015, 2:41 PM

Die paar Dinge habe ich gefixt. Vielen Dank. Wird committet!

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