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rD47758: Update to r40905:
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  • fixes missing &os;, &linux; and incorrect <xref> tags
  • general rewording to replace "you" and address redundancy
  • removes deprecated apps: abacus, gimp-devel, guppi, konq-plugins and renames koffice to calligra
  • incorporates redundant summary into synopsis
  • fixes incorrect port/pkg names and adds localization notes where applicable
  • moves some <sect2> to <sect3> as they make more sense as subsections
  • rm openjdk compile as icedtea Makefile now does this for user
  • bumps up some pkg/port versions
  • adds some URLs to less known apps

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Ein paar Sachen habe ich gefunden...

desktop/chapter.xml
26 ↗(On Diff #10013)

hier würde ich entweder "Serversystemen" schreiben oder Server-Systemen.

623 ↗(On Diff #10013)

graphische

626 ↗(On Diff #10013)

auch hier: graphischen

764 ↗(On Diff #10013)

hier braucht es kein Komma, das "oder" genügt.

769 ↗(On Diff #10013)

Tablets

1049 ↗(On Diff #10013)

hier fehlt ein Punkt.

1086 ↗(On Diff #10013)

ein Leerzeichen zuviel vor "Ausrichtung"

Fehler habe ich korrigiert. Vielen Dank für den Review.

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