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asomers requested review of this revision.Mar 15 2023, 3:29 PM
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  1. Expand a contraction (a requested change)
  2. character formatting for fspacectl and copy_file_range (a suggested change)
  3. one sentence per line (suits AsciiDoc etc.).

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"… it has …" not contracted to "… it's …"

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I wondered whether we need an ® for Apple, as seen at present-day https://www.apple.com/legal/intellectual-property/trademark/appletmlist.html, but (late 1990s) https://web.archive.org/web/19980509035420/http://www.apple.com:80/ I see Apple Computer, Inc., which looks fine (without ®).

(The phrase caught my eye because I opened 270229 – FreeBSD Copyright and Legal Information: corrections, updates a couple of days ago.)

Historical reference from around the same time: https://web.archive.org/web/19980509044028/http://www.apple.com/legal/guidelinesfor3rdparties.html.

asomers updated this revision to Diff 118937.Mar 16 2023, 5:39 PM
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grahamperrin accepted this revision.Mar 16 2023, 7:40 PM

Uppercase H in GitHub (sorry, I missed it earlier).

The solidus / at the tail of the FreshPorts URL for a port is non-essential, but (for consistency) I usually do include it, because it's what's given when finding a port in search results, and so on.

Beyond those two nits, I see no issue. Thanks.

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