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address Bug 203440 - Fixed documentation grammar
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bcr
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rS288833: - address grammar
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https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=203440

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jgh updated this revision to Diff 9160.Oct 5 2015, 3:54 PM
jgh retitled this revision from to address Bug 203440 - Fixed documentation grammar.
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wblock edited edge metadata.Oct 5 2015, 5:30 PM

This seems to be an attempt to clarify the sentence. A little more rearrangement might help:

Each returned
.Li addrinfo
structure contains three members that are suitable for a call to
.Xr socket 2 :
.Fa ai_family ,
.Fa ai_socktype ,
and
.Fa ai_protocol .

Breaking the sentence might help even more.

head/lib/libc/net/getaddrinfo.3
254

Needs a space before the final period, or it is counted as part of the argument.

.Fa ai_protocol .
jgh updated this revision to Diff 9165.Oct 5 2015, 5:45 PM
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jgh updated this revision to Diff 9166.Oct 5 2015, 5:50 PM

updating style per request

wblock accepted this revision.Oct 5 2015, 6:01 PM
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The bug reporter didn't really say what their complaint was, but this is clearer and better.

Please remember to update .Dd, check with igor and mandoc -Tlint, and set for MFC after 1 week. Thanks!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Oct 5 2015, 6:01 PM
jgh added a comment.Oct 5 2015, 6:07 PM

It is noted in the bug title, itself.
"Fixed documentation grammar"

Closed by commit rS288833: - address grammar (authored by jgh). · Explain WhyOct 5 2015, 6:09 PM
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