address Bug 203338
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Authored by jgh on Sep 30 2015, 8:59 PM.

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wblock
remko
bcr

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rD47470: - tighten and clarify wording

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https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=203338

reword sentence. i additionally removed the word 'choke' here as I don't think that is appropriate in this context of a document.

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jgh updated this revision to Diff 8987.Sep 30 2015, 8:59 PM

jgh retitled this revision from to address Bug 203338 .

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jgh added reviewers: bcr, remko, wblock.

jgh set the repository for this revision to rD FreeBSD doc repository - subversion.

wblock added inline comments.Oct 1 2015, 12:26 AM

books/faq/book.xml
3366 ↗	(On Diff #8987)	Phabricator is showing the leading whitespace on this line to have changed. Maybe it was changed to all spaces instead of a tab and some spaces?
3368 ↗	(On Diff #8987)	The original sentence was kind of poorly laid out to communicate what it is trying to say, and the revised version is still not entirely clear. Suggestion for replacing the whole sentence. A file that is being viewed with <command>more</command> can be deleted without causing an error.

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Please build-test before commit. Thanks!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Oct 1 2015, 3:29 PM

Closed by commit rD47470: - tighten and clarify wording (authored by jgh). · Explain WhyOct 1 2015, 3:42 PM

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