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Add gnome MATE news item (have to start somewhere).

I'm up for suggestions for improvements. I'm currently drawing a blank.

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kwm retitled this revision from to Add belated MATE news item.
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kwm added reviewers: wblock, rene.

How about an introductory paragraph that tells the reader (briefly) what MATE is?

en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/gnome/news.xml
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s/build/built/

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"helping tracking" is difficult. Either "helping track" or "help tracking" kind of work, but it's not clear. Maybe "help in tracking"?

kwm edited edge metadata.

In the text mention Desktop Enviroment, I didn't put this in the title
since the news tracker isn't that wide to begin with.
Add upstream release notes url.

en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/gnome/news.xml
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Better with a "the":

Presenting the MATE...

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Oops, s/Enviroment/Environment/

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kwm marked 5 inline comments as done.Aug 5 2015, 4:34 PM

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Add bare gnome 3.16 entry.

Fix typo Annoucing -> Announcing

en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/gnome/news.xml
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The indentation looks wrong, but that could be Phabricator. Things inside the <event> should be indented another level.

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This line can be wrapped, just not between the tags and content:

<p>The offical GNOME 3.16 release notes can be found at
  <a href="https://help.gnome.org/misc/release-notes/3.16/">https://help.gnome.org/misc/release-notes/3.16/</a>.</p>
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Typo:
s/offical/official/

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s/the following/these/

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Same as above, things inside an <event> should be indented another level.

Indent inside <event> blocks.
put the <a> tag in the gnome 3.16 news item on a new line.
Typos

kwm marked 5 inline comments as done.Aug 7 2015, 3:42 PM

Corrected these problems.

wblock edited edge metadata.

The br in the middle of a paragraph looks weird, but I have nothing better to suggest. Please build-test before commit. Thanks!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Aug 7 2015, 7:18 PM
This revision was automatically updated to reflect the committed changes.