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Make several edits to the Apache webserver section in network servers including and update the SSL and PHP sections and make a note about the security reasons of using TLS.
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Authored by trhodes on Thu, Sep 10, 2:13 AM.

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Update the mod_ssl and mod_php sections of the handbook.

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trhodes requested review of this revision.Thu, Sep 10, 2:13 AM
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bcr added a comment.Thu, Sep 10, 6:42 AM

A fine addition to the chapter, well structured.
I've added a few comments and a suggestion inline.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
3561

s/recommend/recommended/

3570

Superfluous "in"

3588

Is it "train of trust" or "chain of trust"?

There seems to be a word missing between "users" and "prevent".

3644–3647

You could have kept the <application>Apache</application> part here.

3672

How about simply "to activate it"?

trhodes updated this revision to Diff 77639.Tue, Sep 29, 6:01 PM
trhodes marked 4 inline comments as done.

Update diff after speaking with bcr.

Updating D26386: Make several edits to the Apache webserver section in

network servers including and update the SSL and PHP
sections and make a note about the security reasons
of using TLS.

bcr added a comment.Wed, Sep 30, 8:07 AM

Minor thing remaining, the rest looks good.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
3588

One more thing I noticed just now that I reread it: we discourage the use of "you".
See the "Be clear" section, fourth paragraph: https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style.html