Make several edits to the Apache webserver section in network servers including and update the SSL and PHP sections and make a note about the security reasons of using TLS.

[trhodes]

Summary

Update the mod_ssl and mod_php sections of the handbook.

[bcr]

A fine addition to the chapter, well structured.
I've added a few comments and a suggestion inline.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml

3561

s/recommend/recommended/

3570

Superfluous "in"

3588

Is it "train of trust" or "chain of trust"?

There seems to be a word missing between "users" and "prevent".

3644–3647

You could have kept the <application>Apache</application> part here.

3672

How about simply "to activate it"?

[trhodes]

Update diff after speaking with bcr.

Updating D26386: Make several edits to the Apache webserver section in

network servers including and update the SSL and PHP
sections and make a note about the security reasons
of using TLS.

[bcr]

Minor thing remaining, the rest looks good.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml

3588

One more thing I noticed just now that I reread it: we discourage the use of "you".
See the "Be clear" section, fourth paragraph: https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style.html

[trhodes]

I think this is the last one that covers all feedback.

Updating D26386: Make several edits to the Apache webserver section in

network servers including and update the SSL and PHP
sections and make a note about the security reasons
of using TLS.

[bcr]

Good to go now! Thanks.

[trhodes]

I never closed this, very odd.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml

3588

I'll change it to "for site visitors" or you think something else, such as end users is better?

3672

This is definitely less wordy, I'm trying to avoid ending a sentence with a preposition. :)

Maybe "to activate the new configuration" ? Or just leave it as is for now?