[handbook] bsdinstall update allocation disk section - ZFS

[carlavilla]

Summary

Upgrade Guided Partitioning Using Root-on-ZFS section

Test Plan

Compile the handbook

[bcr]

A great addition to have. I've provided a few corrections and clarifications.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml

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You can move the <xref part up to the previous line.

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s/Foce/Force/

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s/By default/By default,/

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s/chose activate/chose to activate/

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s/allow/allows/
s/the possibility//

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s/encryption in/encryption is available in/

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s/options/option/

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s/Allow/Allows/
s/thead possibility//

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s/to chose/to/

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I'd write: Encrypts the swap with a temporary key each time... (combine this with the next sentence).
s/and discarded/and discards it/

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... storage of all connected devices, but no redundancy.
s/the one/just one/
s/the information/the data on the pool/
s/is lost./is lost irrevocably./

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s/can be readed/is read/
s/from any disk/from all disks in parallel./

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I'd write:
Write performance is slower as the data must be written to all disks in the pool. (basically combine the two short sentences into one)

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s/options needs/option requires/

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... and a minimum of four disks.

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s/let/leave/

[carlavilla]

Thanks for the reviews!

[bcr]

Thank you for these changes. You can commit them now.