[handbook] bsdinstall update 2.6. Allocating Disk Space section
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I like this change, but have a few remarks.
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| 1164 ↗ | (On Diff #68668) | No comma needed here. Also, lowercase the "file system", see the word list: https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style-word-list.html |
| 1182 ↗ | (On Diff #68668) | Not sure if we need to clarify here that this is not a native ZFS encryption, but one with GELI. You could write: ... creates a root-on-ZFS system with optional GELI encryption and support for ... |
| 1183 ↗ | (On Diff #68668) | This will not build without a closing </firstterm> ;-) |