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[handbook] bsdinstall update 2.6. Allocating Disk Space section

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I like this change, but have a few remarks.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
1164 ↗(On Diff #68668)

No comma needed here. Also, lowercase the "file system", see the word list: https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style-word-list.html

1182 ↗(On Diff #68668)

Not sure if we need to clarify here that this is not a native ZFS encryption, but one with GELI. You could write:

... creates a root-on-ZFS system with optional GELI encryption and support for ...

1183 ↗(On Diff #68668)

This will not build without a closing </firstterm> ;-)

Fixed. Thanks for the corrections. :D

Cool, go ahead then!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Feb 22 2020, 9:17 PM