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Authored by pauamma_gundo.com on Dec 3 2019, 5:56 PM.
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rD53655: Simplify language by removing spurious comma.
Summary

While I'm at it, simplify language a bit.

PR: 241674

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Tested with lynx.

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pauamma_gundo.com created this revision.Dec 3 2019, 5:56 PM
Harbormaster completed remote builds in B27914: Diff 65169.Dec 3 2019, 5:56 PM
bcr accepted this revision.Dec 3 2019, 6:05 PM
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Looks good to me.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Dec 3 2019, 6:05 PM
pauamma_gundo.com added a comment.Dec 3 2019, 8:44 PM

Thanks. BTW, I'm not a committer, so someone will have to take care of this step for me.

crees accepted this revision.Dec 3 2019, 9:25 PM
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crees added inline comments.
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
990 ↗(On Diff #65169)

'must' would be more elegant here, as it's correct with NIC and NICs.

Happy to commit this if no one has time?

pauamma_gundo.com added inline comments.Dec 3 2019, 10:23 PM
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
990 ↗(On Diff #65169)

Indeed. Thanks for the suggestion.

pauamma_gundo.com updated this revision to Diff 65183.Dec 3 2019, 10:25 PM

Address crees' comment.

This revision now requires review to proceed.Dec 3 2019, 10:25 PM
Harbormaster completed remote builds in B27924: Diff 65183.Dec 3 2019, 10:25 PM
crees accepted this revision.Dec 4 2019, 11:50 AM

Great, will commit, thanks.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Dec 4 2019, 11:50 AM
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