Remove spurious comma.
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Authored by pauamma_gundo.com on Dec 3 2019, 5:56 PM.

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crees

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rD53655: Simplify language by removing spurious comma.

Summary

While I'm at it, simplify language a bit.

PR: 241674

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Tested with lynx.

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rD FreeBSD doc repository - subversion

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pauamma_gundo.com created this revision.Dec 3 2019, 5:56 PM

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B27914: Diff 65169.Dec 3 2019, 5:56 PM

Looks good to me.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Dec 3 2019, 6:05 PM

Thanks. BTW, I'm not a committer, so someone will have to take care of this step for me.

crees accepted this revision.Dec 3 2019, 9:25 PM

crees added a subscriber: crees.

crees added inline comments.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
990 ↗	(On Diff #65169)	'must' would be more elegant here, as it's correct with NIC and NICs. Happy to commit this if no one has time?

pauamma_gundo.com added inline comments.Dec 3 2019, 10:23 PM

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
990 ↗	(On Diff #65169)	Indeed. Thanks for the suggestion.

Address crees' comment.

This revision now requires review to proceed.Dec 3 2019, 10:25 PM

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B27924: Diff 65183.Dec 3 2019, 10:25 PM

Great, will commit, thanks.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Dec 4 2019, 11:50 AM

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head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml

Remove spurious comma.ClosedPublicActions