This contains some tips to troubleshoot FreeBSD as a host or when
attempting to create guests.
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- rD52814: Add a troubleshooting section to the Xen chapter.
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It seems like a lot, but most of these are easy to fix. Let textproc/igor run over it a couple of times and you'll get the exact spots where you need to fix things.
Thank you for the work writing these. I'd be happy to review an updated diff.
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml | ||
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| 1725 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | There should be an empty line after the title tag. |
| 1726 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | s/constain/contains/ |
| 1727 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | s/troubleshot/troubleshoot/ |
| 1729 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | You can move the closing <para> up right behind the "guest." part. textproc/igor will tell you about these. |
| 1733 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | You can start writing right after <para>, no need for a line break here. |
| 1734 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | s/troubleshootting/troubleshooting/ |
| 1740 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | Extra space after a sentence stop. textproc/igor will also find and tell you about those occurances (what a snitch). ;-) |
| 1762 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | The "in order" can be left out. |
| 1763 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | s/reate/rate/ |
| 1764 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | s/guest/guests/ |
| 1772 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | I'd add: "To activate verbose booting, run this command:" |
| 1780 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | s/this/these/ |
| 1783 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | s/diagnostic/diagnostics/ (or even analysis?) |
| 1788 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | The "creation" should be capitalized. textproc/igor will remind you of that. Only a few words in title tags are lowercase like "the", "a", or "of". |
| 1799 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | I'd also add <literal> tags to this instance of xl. |
| 1800 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | Sentence stop missing here. Not sure if textproc/igor is looking for those... |
| 1824 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | you can also use the &os; placeholder here (and in the next two lines) if you like, but it's optional. |
| 1826 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | I'd add a sentence stop after the </filename> here and start a new sentence: Both log files can contain useful information for debugging. |
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Thanks, new version coming.
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml | ||
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| 1824 ↗ | (On Diff #53656) | I've left this as 'freebsd', since the guest name in the example config name uses 'freebsd' instead of &os; |
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OK as well. Thanks for doing the work. Let me know if I should commit it (giving proper attribution, of course).