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Reword paragraphs in cutting edge section of handbook
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Authored by sevan on Apr 3 2017, 8:11 PM.

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rD50128: Reword sentences to improve readability.
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Spurred on from Bug 218072 to removed an extraneous comma.
Reword two sentences to improve readability.

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sevan created this revision.Apr 3 2017, 8:11 PM
Harbormaster completed remote builds in B8471: Diff 26987.Apr 3 2017, 8:11 PM
bcr accepted this revision.Apr 4 2017, 12:06 PM

Yes, this sounds better when reading it.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Apr 4 2017, 12:06 PM
Closed by commit rD50128: Reword sentences to improve readability. (authored by sevan). · Explain WhyApr 4 2017, 1:17 PM
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head/
en_US.ISO8859-1/
books/
handbook/
cutting-edge/
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