• Don't say "The Foobar", it is incorrect. "The Foobar port" is better and more accurate (as we're in fact updating our ports, while vendor is updating their software. UPDATING talks about the former) [*]
• Glance over several other entries and improve on wording and whitespace
• Reformat overly short or long lines. Normally, 72-78 chars per line is most readable and pretty (there're a lot more to fix)
• Spell sql' as SQL' where appropriate. (Ditto for cpan', svn'.)

Suggested by: gavin [*]