Implemented suggested fix for bug #193612: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=193612
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| /usr/home/tmoore/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml | ||
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| 1177–1178 | Since we are here, the old sentence that starts with "To do this" needs work. own personal <filename>fonts.conf</filename> file: <filename>~/.config/fontconfig/fonts.conf</filename>. This file uses the same <acronym>XML</acronym> format described above.</para> | |
| 1179 | Wrapping the stuff from the previous line onto this one is a whitespace-only change, which should be done in a separate commit. | |
Updated with suggested fixes. Also replaced redundant "Finally" as the next paragraph begins with "One last point:".
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| 1177–1178 | Good call on the "Finally", I didn't see that. The whole introductory pause can be removed, I think. Just start with "Users can". | |
One last thing...
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| 1178–1182 | s/via/with/ | |