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.\" @(#)systat.1 8.2 (Berkeley) 12/30/93 | .\" @(#)systat.1 8.2 (Berkeley) 12/30/93 | ||||
.\" $FreeBSD$ | .\" $FreeBSD$ | ||||
.\" | .\" | ||||
.Dd November 10, 2016 | .Dd November 20, 2016 | ||||
.Dt SYSTAT 1 | .Dt SYSTAT 1 | ||||
.Os | .Os | ||||
.Sh NAME | .Sh NAME | ||||
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.It Ar display-commands | .It Ar display-commands | ||||
A list of commands specific for this display. These commands can also | A list of commands specific for this display. These commands can also | ||||
jilles: A line break for a new sentence is needed here as well.
"specific to" sounds better than… | |||||
be entered interactively and are described for each display separately | be entered interactively and are described for each display separately | ||||
below. If the command of the display requires an argument or arguments, | below. | ||||
it is possible to specify them as separate command line argument. To finish | If the command of the display requires an argument or arguments, | ||||
Done Inline Actionsthe "of" is still there. bcr: the "of" is still there. | |||||
display commands it is possible to use double dash at the end | it is possible to specify them as separate command line argument. | ||||
of the list. For example: | To finish display commands it is possible to use double dash at the end | ||||
of the list. | |||||
jillesUnsubmitted Done Inline ActionsSomehow the phrasing sounds awkward (unrelated to your change). Perhaps something like: If the command requires arguments, they can be specified as separate command line arguments. A command line argument .Fl - will finish display commands. jilles: Somehow the phrasing sounds awkward (unrelated to your change).
Perhaps something like:
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.Pp | .Pp | ||||
.Dl Nm Fl ifstat Fl match Ar bge0,em1 Fl pps | .Dl Nm Fl ifstat Fl match Ar bge0,em1 Fl pps | ||||
.Pp | .Pp | ||||
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This will display statistics of packets per second for network interfaces | This will display statistics of packets per second for network interfaces | ||||
named as bge0 and em1. | named as bge0 and em1. | ||||
.Pp | .Pp | ||||
.Dl Nm Fl iostat Fl numeric Fl - Ar 2.1 | .Dl Nm Fl iostat Fl numbers Fl - Ar 2.1 | ||||
.Pp | .Pp | ||||
This will display all IO statistics in a numeric format and the information | This will display all IO statistics in a numeric format and the information | ||||
will be refreshed each 2.1 seconds. | will be refreshed each 2.1 seconds. | ||||
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A line break for a new sentence is needed here as well.
"specific to" sounds better than "specific for" to me here.