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<string>sans-serif</string> | <string>sans-serif</string> | ||||
</edit> | </edit> | ||||
</match> </programlisting> | </match> </programlisting> | ||||
<para>Once you have finished editing | <para>Once you have finished editing | ||||
<filename>local.conf</filename> make sure you end the file | <filename>local.conf</filename> make sure you end the file | ||||
with the <literal></fontconfig></literal> tag. Not | with the <literal></fontconfig></literal> tag. Not | ||||
doing this will cause your changes to be ignored.</para> | doing this will cause your changes to be ignored.</para> | ||||
<para>Finally, users can add their own settings via their | <para>Also, users can add personalized settings via their own | ||||
wblock: Since we are here, the old sentence that starts with "To do this" needs work.
"To do this" adds… | |||||
Done Inline ActionsGood call on the "Finally", I didn't see that. The whole introductory pause can be removed, I think. Just start with "Users can". wblock: Good call on the "Finally", I didn't see that. The whole introductory pause can be removed, I… | |||||
personal <filename>.fonts.conf</filename> files. To do this, | <filename>fonts.conf</filename> file: | ||||
Done Inline ActionsWrapping the stuff from the previous line onto this one is a whitespace-only change, which should be done in a separate commit. wblock: Wrapping the stuff from the previous line onto this one is a whitespace-only change, which… | |||||
each user should simply create a | <filename>~/.config/fontconfig/fonts.conf</filename>. This | ||||
<filename>~/.fonts.conf</filename>. This file must also be in | file uses the same <acronym>XML</acronym> format described | ||||
XML format.</para> | above.</para> | ||||
Done Inline Actionss/via/with/ wblock: s/via/with/ | |||||
<indexterm><primary>LCD screen</primary></indexterm> | <indexterm><primary>LCD screen</primary></indexterm> | ||||
<indexterm><primary>Fonts</primary> | <indexterm><primary>Fonts</primary> | ||||
<secondary>LCD screen</secondary></indexterm> | <secondary>LCD screen</secondary></indexterm> | ||||
<para>One last point: with an LCD screen, sub-pixel sampling may | <para>One last point: with an LCD screen, sub-pixel sampling may | ||||
be desired. This basically treats the (horizontally | be desired. This basically treats the (horizontally | ||||
separated) red, green and blue components separately to | separated) red, green and blue components separately to | ||||
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Since we are here, the old sentence that starts with "To do this" needs work.
"To do this" adds nothing but filler (and a halting pause) and can be removed.
"Simply" is a word to be avoided because it can sound patronizing.
"Should" is also something to avoid, although it was used correctly here, as a recommendation.
How about (ignoring wrap):