Fix bug #193612

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Summary

Implemented suggested fix for bug #193612: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=193612

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/usr/home/tmoore/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml

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Since we are here, the old sentence that starts with "To do this" needs work.
"To do this" adds nothing but filler (and a halting pause) and can be removed.
"Simply" is a word to be avoided because it can sound patronizing.
"Should" is also something to avoid, although it was used correctly here, as a recommendation.
How about (ignoring wrap):

own personal <filename>fonts.conf</filename> file:
<filename>~/.config/fontconfig/fonts.conf</filename>. This
file uses the same <acronym>XML</acronym> format described above.</para>

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Wrapping the stuff from the previous line onto this one is a whitespace-only change, which should be done in a separate commit.
However, the suggestions above change content on this line, so never mind.

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Updated with suggested fixes. Also replaced redundant "Finally" as the next paragraph begins with "One last point:".

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/usr/home/tmoore/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml

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Good call on the "Finally", I didn't see that. The whole introductory pause can be removed, I think. Just start with "Users can".

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Remove "Also," from the beginning of the paragraph.

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One last thing...

/usr/home/tmoore/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml

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s/via/with/

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Replaced "via", is now "with".

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Krelbf the snootlax!