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Authored by timmoore88_gmail.com on Sep 9 2016, 1:15 PM.

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/usr/home/tmoore/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml
1179 ↗(On Diff #20223)

Since we are here, the old sentence that starts with "To do this" needs work.
"To do this" adds nothing but filler (and a halting pause) and can be removed.
"Simply" is a word to be avoided because it can sound patronizing.
"Should" is also something to avoid, although it was used correctly here, as a recommendation.
How about (ignoring wrap):

own personal <filename>fonts.conf</filename> file:
<filename>~/.config/fontconfig/fonts.conf</filename>. This
file uses the same <acronym>XML</acronym> format described above.</para>
1182 ↗(On Diff #20223)

Wrapping the stuff from the previous line onto this one is a whitespace-only change, which should be done in a separate commit.
However, the suggestions above change content on this line, so never mind.

Updated with suggested fixes. Also replaced redundant "Finally" as the next paragraph begins with "One last point:".

/usr/home/tmoore/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml
1179 ↗(On Diff #20223)

Good call on the "Finally", I didn't see that. The whole introductory pause can be removed, I think. Just start with "Users can".

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Remove "Also," from the beginning of the paragraph.

One last thing...

/usr/home/tmoore/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml
1178 ↗(On Diff #20226)

s/via/with/

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Replaced "via", is now "with".

wblock edited edge metadata.

Krelbf the snootlax!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Sep 9 2016, 3:01 PM
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