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&lt;/match&gt; </programlisting> &lt;/match&gt; </programlisting>
<para>Once you have finished editing <para>Once you have finished editing
<filename>local.conf</filename> make sure you end the file <filename>local.conf</filename> make sure you end the file
with the <literal>&lt;/fontconfig&gt;</literal> tag. Not with the <literal>&lt;/fontconfig&gt;</literal> tag. Not
doing this will cause your changes to be ignored.</para> doing this will cause your changes to be ignored.</para>
<para>Finally, users can add their own settings via their <para>Finally, users can add their own settings via their
personal <filename>.fonts.conf</filename> files. To do this, personal <filename>fonts.conf</filename> files. To do this,
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Since we are here, the old sentence that starts with "To do this" needs work.
"To do this" adds nothing but filler (and a halting pause) and can be removed.
"Simply" is a word to be avoided because it can sound patronizing.
"Should" is also something to avoid, although it was used correctly here, as a recommendation.
How about (ignoring wrap):

own personal <filename>fonts.conf</filename> file:
<filename>~/.config/fontconfig/fonts.conf</filename>. This
file uses the same <acronym>XML</acronym> format described above.</para>
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Good call on the "Finally", I didn't see that. The whole introductory pause can be removed, I think. Just start with "Users can".

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each user should simply create a each user should simply create a
<filename>~/.fonts.conf</filename>. This file must also be in <filename>~/.config/fontconfig/fonts.conf</filename>. This
XML format.</para> file must also be in XML format.</para>
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Wrapping the stuff from the previous line onto this one is a whitespace-only change, which should be done in a separate commit.
However, the suggestions above change content on this line, so never mind.

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s/via/with/

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<indexterm><primary>LCD screen</primary></indexterm> <indexterm><primary>LCD screen</primary></indexterm>
<indexterm><primary>Fonts</primary> <indexterm><primary>Fonts</primary>
<secondary>LCD screen</secondary></indexterm> <secondary>LCD screen</secondary></indexterm>
<para>One last point: with an LCD screen, sub-pixel sampling may <para>One last point: with an LCD screen, sub-pixel sampling may
be desired. This basically treats the (horizontally be desired. This basically treats the (horizontally
separated) red, green and blue components separately to separated) red, green and blue components separately to
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