- Move attribution information into <chapterinfo>
- Remove myself from list of chapter authors, since I didn't really add very much.
- Add more <filename> and <varname> tags
- Use <varname> instead of <literal> around sysctl names
- Reword references to look better without the benefit of a hyperlink
- <para>Please see &man.ata.4;.</para> + <para>For more information, please see &man.ata.4;.</para>
- Use 'SoftUpdates' consistently.
- Saying that an "error message shows up in dmesg" is a bit cryptic for new users, so explain that messages get sent to a system buffer that is viewed with the dmesg command.