Wrap author attribution in <chapterinfo>.
Reword a couple of run-on sentences to use better subject-verb
agreement.
Terminate all items in a list with a period, not just some of
them.
Add <username> and <application> tags as appropriate.
"pw(8) has the information"
doesn't look well without the benefits of a hyperlink. Reword this to:
"For more information, please see pw(8)."
Update example to change shells to zsh since tcsh is now in the base
system.