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* Remove call for contributions from the synopsis of this chapter. A

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  • Remove call for contributions from the synopsis of this chapter. A call for help is listed on the third page of the printed Handbook or on the top level index for the HTML version and it need not be repeated here.
  • End all list items with a period, not just some of them.
  • Reword a couple of sentences so that they don't start with command names.
  • Reword a couple of confusing run-on sentences into more succinct sentences with a separate <note> with additional information.
  • Add a couple of missing words and remove some extra words to construct sentences that make sense.
  • Reworded paragraph with awkward "Either .. alternatively" construction.
  • Correct a reference to the Amanda port so that it looks good in printed form. Dima's <port> tag would be helpful here.
  • Fix a couple of other minor typos.

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murrayAuthored on Jul 21 2001, 12:12 AM
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R9:eaa53a21e103: Modified <indexterm>'s to be more specific with <filename>, <command>,
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