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Rewrite first three paragraphs of this article to eliminate run-on

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Rewrite first three paragraphs of this article to eliminate run-on
sentences, poor grammar, excess verbiage, etc., etc.

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Michael Lucas <mwlucas@FreeBSD.org>Authored on Mar 11 2002, 2:44 PM
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R9:875a40b58bb5: Add www/en/docs.sgml to the version bump list, so we don't forget to
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Michael Lucas <mwlucas@FreeBSD.org> committed R9:025392780c1b: Rewrite first three paragraphs of this article to eliminate run-on (authored by Michael Lucas <mwlucas@FreeBSD.org>).Mar 11 2002, 2:44 PM