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Firewall Update Teil 3/4 -> IPFW

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Wow, wieder ein grosses Stück Arbeit. Habe ein paar Verbesserungen, der Grossteil ist aber in Ordnung, Top!

firewalls/chapter.xml
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s/einen/ein/

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s/unerfahrenen/unerfahrene/

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s/Konfiugrationsszenarien/Konfigurationsszenarien/

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muss hier nicht ein Leerzeichen zwischen Rechner und dem <systemitem> sein?

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hier dann auch...

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s/keinen//

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s/wird/werden/

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s/aufbebaut/aufgebaut/

bhd marked 8 inline comments as done.Jul 4 2016, 2:55 PM

Super! Vielen Dank für den Review. Fehler habe ich gefixt.

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