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rD48147: Update to r42910:

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Add section describing the new iSCSI stack.

This section was translated from the latest r47889.

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bhd updated this revision to Diff 12962.Feb 2 2016, 8:13 PM

bhd retitled this revision from to Update de_DE/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml to r42910.

bhd updated this object.

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Fix two bad programlistings.

Ein paar Anmerkungen, der Rest gefällt mir gut. Danke!

network-servers/chapter.xml
6580 ↗	(On Diff #12964)	hier fehlt ein an am Satzende.
6709 ↗	(On Diff #12964)	s/Gerätedatein/Gerätedateien/
6766 ↗	(On Diff #12964)	nach bestimmen würde ich ein Komma setzen (eingeschobener Nebensatz).

Alle Dinge gefixt. Vielen Dank!

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