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rD48147: Update to r42910:
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Add section describing the new iSCSI stack.

This section was translated from the latest r47889.

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Fix two bad programlistings.

Ein paar Anmerkungen, der Rest gefällt mir gut. Danke!

network-servers/chapter.xml
6580 ↗(On Diff #12964)

hier fehlt ein an am Satzende.

6709 ↗(On Diff #12964)

s/Gerätedatein/Gerätedateien/

6766 ↗(On Diff #12964)

nach bestimmen würde ich ein Komma setzen (eingeschobener Nebensatz).

bhd marked 3 inline comments as done.Feb 3 2016, 6:33 PM

Alle Dinge gefixt. Vielen Dank!

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